Redundancy বাহুল্য (দোষ)

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Redundancy বাহুল্য (দোষ)

কোন Sentence এ একই অর্থসম্পন্ন word বা অভিব্যক্তির অহেতুক পুনরাবৃত্তিকে Redundancy বলে। বাংলায় তা বাহুল্য দোষ হিসেবে পরিচিত।
Concise expression (correct)
✖️Redundant expression (incorrect)

Repeat
✖️Repeat  again

Return
✖️Return  back

Revert
✖️Revert  back

Join
✖️Join  together

Compete
✖️Compete  together

Advance
✖️Advance  forward

Proceed
✖️Proceed  forward

Progress
✖️Progress forward

When
✖️The time When

Where
✖️The place Where

Where
✖️In a  situation Where

Same
✖️Same  identical

Innovation
✖️New Innovation

Discuss
✖️Discuss  about

Because / Owing to
✖️Owing  to  the fact that

Because / Due to
✖️Due  to the fact that

Twins
✖️Two Twins

Because
✖️Reason Because

Enough / sufficient
✖️sufficient  enough

    

Redundant word যুক্ত সকল sentence -ই  incorrect


Incorrect: she  repeated  the words  again.
Correct: She repeated the words. 

Incorrect:   He  will  return back  soon.
Correct:  He will return   soon.

Incorrect: They reverted the man back.
Correct:  They   reverted the man.

Incorrect :   we  joined  together  in a  meeting.
Correct: we joined   in a meeting

Incorrect : The  two  rivals  competed  together.
Correct : The  two  rivals  competed. 

Incorrect : we  advanced  forward.
Correct : we  advanced. 

Incorrect: The mountain climbers proceeded forward.
Correct: The mountain climbers proceeded. 

Incorrect: The course allows students to progress forward at their own speed.
Correct : The course  allows  students  to progress  at  their  own  speed.

Incorrect: I know the time when he will come.
Correct : I  know   when  he will  come.

Incorrect :  I know the place  where  he lives.
Correct:  I know where he lives

Incorrect:  This is a new innovation.
Correct: This is an   innovation.

Incorrect:  The ideas are same identical.
Correct:  The ideas are same. 

Incorrect: The water is sufficient enough for them.
Correct: The water is sufficient   for them.

Incorrect: He came  here  for  the  purpose  of helping  me.
Correct:  He came here for helping me.

Incorrect :  I could  not attend   the meeting  due to the  fact  that  I was  ill.
Correct : I could  not attend  the meeting because I was  ill

Incorrect :  we discussed  about  the economic  condition  of Bangladesh.
Correct: we discussed the economic condition of Bangladesh.

 

Redundancy - unnecessary phrases

Incorrect:  Mr.  Davis knows a great deal in terms of the condition of the situation.
Correct: Mr.  Davis knows a great deal of the situation.

Incorrect :  It  was  a problem  which  was  very  difficult in  character  and  very  delicate  in nature.

Correct : It  was  a problem  which  was  very  difficult and  very  delicate. 

Incorrect:  The disease was very serious in the nature of it.
Correct: The disease was very serious.

Incorrect:  Mary had always behaved in a responsible manner.
Correct : Mary  had  always  behaved  in a responsible.

 

Redundancy – Repetition of noun by   pronoun:

Incorrect:  Steve  he  plans  to  go  into business with  his father.
Correct: Steve plans to go into business with his father.

Incorrect:  My sister   she found  a store   that imported  food  from our country.
Correct:   My sister found a store   that imported food from our country.
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